MGoFiction: Inferno-Canto I

Submitted by formerlyanonymous on July 1st, 2010 at 3:00 PM

Before baseball season was started, I began to write an mgofiction. I've made it about 10 posts before being distracted for the last 6 months. Now, it's a rush to get it done before the season starts. So in the loosely adapted ways of Dante, I present to you the first canto of Formerly's Football Inferno. I promise nothing when it comes to grammar, punctuation, logical plots, or anything that normally goes into story writing.

Canto I

I, formerlyanonymous, have been on a epic adventure over the last few seasons. I've been subjected to the worst back-to-back seasons of Michigan football in history, deep into the hell of Michigan football. Along my way through this agony, I made note of what exactly I saw. So here is my account.

It all began on a horror filled afternoon in September. I was at a game in Ann Arbor on a warm, picturesque day. I remember going into it hoping Michigan wouldn't be embarrassed by playing a close game against an inferior opponent, albeit an opponent featuring a type of offense Michigan had often flailed and failed wildly against. My worst fears were more than realized – rather than that 3 point high scoring game I expected, Michigan lost in devastating fashion. Crable blocked the outside guy instead of the inside, and the Wolverine's desperation field goal as time expired was blocked.

I found myself walking out of Michigan Stadium stunned. I left out the southwest gates and walked. I don't know how long I was walking, but after several hours, days, weeks, I don't even know. The time just passed, yet I found myself knowing how the season ended, how the new coaching search ended.  Days just past unhappily.

When I awoke from my trance, I found myself lost in the woods. It was no longer that picturesque Saturday in Ann Arbor. It was a gray, misty-rain day, somewhat cool. There was no sun in the sky to point my directions home.

As I started to panic that I might be in the hell hole known as northwest Ohio, I could hear something creeping in the woods. I tried to stay quiet, hoping whatever the animal was would pass, but it grew closer, louder.

All of a sudden, it was upon me. Out from the brush came a wolverine. I was scared because I had heard of the ferociousness of the species. This one however, seemed beaten, as if it had escaped one of those giant bear traps. It's leg was heavily scarred. The wolverine look fat and slow, maybe one too many large pizzas. His claws were still sharp, ready to strike, but the rest of its body looked unkempt and weak.

Being the less than intelligent person I am, I approached the poor thing. That set it off. It growled a high pitch sound you would expect from a smaller dog. Before it could pounce on me and send me to my doom, a flash of light blinded both myself and the wolverine. A spirit emerged from a burrow in the ground. The spirit caught the wolverine in mid air, and held it as if it were a common house cat.

davycrockett Needless to say I was startled. When the spirit turned to me, I couldn't help but recognize the face. It was John Wayne dress up as Davy Crockett from the original edition of The Alamo.

"Well howdy there," Mr. Wayne started, as if the fact that a ghostly spirit in a movie costume sparing my life from destruction by a wild wolverine hadn't put me into enough shock. "I'm Davy Crockett. What are you doing in this forsaken forest?"

I replied, "Wait, aren't you John Wayne, but just dressed up as Davy Crockett?"

"Don't get smart with me son, I'm the one that can throw this here critter right back on you," he retorted quickly.

"Noted… And thanks," I answered somewhat embarrassed. "Actually, I'm lost. Michigan football left me wandering and pondering my addiction to football. It's like mgoblog isn't even important to me after spending all of my free time there the last two years."

"Michigan, huh? I heard of 'em. Solid bunch of winners right there."

"Yeah, but today was bad. It's left me lost not only as a fan, but hell, now I'm god damn lost in the middle of nowhere talking to the spirit of a guy who wants to be Davy Crockett – no offense or anything. I just don't know what to do next."

"Well, partner, I think I can help you out a bit. Ya see, I'm a spirit that resides in the underworld. It's a pretty special underworld at that, it's the hell of Michigan football. You see, when men and women die, they don't go to none of that Christian heaven or hell. Heck, there ain't no such thing as God, Satan, or Jesus. Well, there's this Jesus character, but he's damned pretty deep in hell – real gueer. He loves him some Irish men. Me I've never liked the Irish. Ah, heck, you got me ramblin'. Anyway, you're pretty lost out here in these woods. I can't lead you out of here, but if you want to follow me, I can show you just how far down this rabbit hole goes. I promise you, on the other side, you'll find happiness not only by reaching home, but you'll also find yourself an answer about Michigan football."

"Well, Mr. Wayn – Mr. Crockett, I don't see much else of a choice."

And we were off on a journey through the Hell of Michigan Football.

Comments

formerlyanonymous

July 1st, 2010 at 3:22 PM ^

Nah, it's probably going to end up around 13 or 14. I've got the first 10 canto's done. The creativity is suffering right now, but I'm hoping that the deadline will help out. Lots of material in the last 6 months can only help.

tricks574

July 1st, 2010 at 3:20 PM ^

Been waiting for this ever since it was mentioned. Later on it needs to be compounded into one document, complete with footnoted links to Wolverinehistorian videos and mgoblog posts relevant to the chapter.

formerlyanonymous

July 2nd, 2010 at 2:37 PM ^

Dante starts his quest lost in the woods. Virgil then escorts him through the rabbit hole to see just how far down it will go. We'll enter hell in the next installment. This is just a preamble, if you will.

The following installments will be each ring of hell, with the 8th circle possibly being broken up into a few. I won't do 10 cantos for the 10 bolgies, but I may need to group them. Each ring of hell, along with it's sublevels will try to mirror the same vices of Dantes, if not a bit symbolically. Violence is violence against the program,  lust, gluttony, and limbo should all be pretty clearly related to the same circles as Dante's version, if you're familiar with it. You might also see some of the same punishments in the same rings. So if a punishment or particular detail sounds unusually specific, it's probably in an attempt to stay close to Dante's version.

MGoShoe

July 1st, 2010 at 3:37 PM ^

...standing in for Virgil as our protagonist's guide through purgatory and hell, I'm very interested to see who takes the place of Beatrice as the story wends its way through heaven. 

Bolton22

July 2nd, 2010 at 12:51 AM ^

Yes, I will get neg banged on this but I was 11 when he late hit Prior that esentially cost us the 06 OSU game. I was so young that ever since then it did not matter what he did I did not like the guy, even if he was a decent player. When I got wind that we lost that game, I was on my way to the mall with my friend. My dad called and explained what happened, I instantly hated Crable even more.

Njia

July 2nd, 2010 at 9:32 AM ^

Whether Bucknuts has user-contributed fiction as an homage to Dante?

/Snort

/Guffaw

Seriously, FA, this is inspired. I can't wait for the rest. Are any MGoMembers going to make cameos?

formerlyanonymous

July 2nd, 2010 at 2:35 PM ^

No current members will make appearances. There are some social commentaries as we go along, and I'm not into insulting members, although one no longer current member is used for familiarity . Mix of historical figures, players, Michigan icons, mascots, memes, and the like.

To answer a previous question, no Purgatory and Paradise is currently in the works. I'm hoping to get the Inferno done before football season gets here, so a post every few days to pass July. The latter two comedies may come next off season. Just with the way things have gone for Michigan football the last few years, mixed with the explosion of the board, the Hell portion just seemed too apt a comparison. Perhaps if this season goes right, there may be a Purgatory and then Paradise to recap it.

Njia

July 2nd, 2010 at 10:39 PM ^

I took 5 semesters of Italian at Michigan. In the last semester, we studied mostly literature, (it was assumed in the curriculum that the first 4 semesters were "learning to read/write/speak", while semesters 5 thru "x" were "reading/writing/speaking to learn").

Anyway, we had to read excerpts from Inferno in the last semester. It was both good and bad. Good, that I could read it (mostly) in its native language; bad, that it was a bit like trying to read "Beowulf" when I was in high school, (i.e. "wait, what did he say?"). That semester nearly kicked my ass. It was Hell, (so to speak).

allansrule

July 3rd, 2010 at 1:05 AM ^

I feel being forced to ride a "hard tail" bicycle, bearing load of Yooper deer camp killage, while tormentors ride dual suspension mountain bikes over kick-ass jumps/tree roots/stacked wood piles, would be very appropriate punishment on some level.  Use your creative license there.  It's your story