OT: Started a new blog. Advice needed

Submitted by Hill.FootballR… on

So I'm a recent Michigan grad and I decided to start a sports blog. It seemed like the only thing to do with a degree in Mechanical Engineering. I've been a huge fan of this blog for a long time and was tired of reading a lot of terrible, boring writing regarding the sports I love.

For now I am planning on writing about all sports but my first two pieces are about college football. I linked my first story below and would appreciate any feedback you have.

http://thesportscourtblog.wordpress.com/2013/01/08/another-great-season…

Victor Hale II

January 12th, 2013 at 3:56 AM ^

Maybe you could fill the (free content) void left by Tremendous getting called up to the big leagues? Recruiting junkies, of which there are scores, will flock to your site and check back multiple times per day if the content is there.

Cold War

January 12th, 2013 at 10:46 AM ^

To be really blunt...

1) Your writing is just okay and the piece is a bore. It's been done a million times. Practice your craft and take  some of the suggestions  above regarding content. Be unique.

2) You'll almost certainly never make money with a sports blog.

3) Keeping up the content is far more time consuming than you realize.

4) If  you write as a hobby and want people to read it, Bleacher Report. I know most of their stuff is crap, but there is traffic there and I think you're good enough to get accepted. Believe it or not, they reject 80% of the folks that  want to write for them.

LSAClassOf2000

January 12th, 2013 at 8:31 AM ^

"*I will save my opinion that too many teams qualify for bowl games for a different day."

Actually, and this is strictly an organizational thing, if you integrate this opinion into your inaugural post, it would probably make it even more intriguing in my opinion as you hint at this but don't use it to further buttress the point you're making when it definitely would help and make this piece stand out a little more. 

I don't have a blog beyond a rarely updated LiveJournal account, but I am a published writer with two books and a few articles to my credit. As someone mentioned, write often - it's the best way to get more proficient, and in the beginning, work on style as much as content.

Another thing that I have always found to be helpful is to have around you someone who is willing to provide honest feedback, ideally someone with no vested interest in the subject matter. I have   found that if you can make it interesting for someone who wasn't interested before, you're on the right track. 

Good luck on this. It's a crowded field, but with hard work and the right people to help you, anything is possible. 

SalvatoreQuattro

January 12th, 2013 at 10:26 AM ^

Firstly, not everyone is a writer. Many people  believe that writing is easy, but it's not. At least not the kind that stands out from the crowd. You should ask yourself if your writing ability is the type that will attract and keep readers. For blogs this is arguably the number one determinanting factor in it becoming  widely read  or taking up permanent residence in Bolivia.

MGOBLOG stands because of this very reason. For a guy whose degree is in copmputer science, Brian writes extremely well. One can tell two things about Brian from his writing: that he has spent a considerable amount of time writing  and that he is extremely well-read. Both are equally important, but the latter is what strengthens the former. I have no idea of how well-read you are, but I would suggest reading a lot of literature, history, etc. It will surprise you how lively your writing will become once you have immersed yourself in the world of the written word. Instead of the dry scientific writing of engineers you will find yourself using the much more vibrant language of writers.  This is the type of writing that will be draw and keep people in. 

Secondly, establish an overarching theme to your blog.  I made the mistake of doing this. My blog was a blog about nothing.  I just wrote what came to me on that particular day. No informatiive or eloquent posts, just spur-of-the-moment musings. I found that this was not a good way to attract interest.

 

Finally, be yourself. In constructing your blog create it in the image of yourself. Don't attempt to be like Brian or any other blogger. Attempting to do so is, for the lack of a better word, the behavior of a tool. It also is the product of an unimaginative mind. Don't simply borrow memes from other places, but create your one. Creativity is what people notice and crave. Give that to them. To that end include whatever idiosyncrasies you have--and any interesting person has them--in your blog and posts. In other words, be unique. 

ToledoWolverine

January 12th, 2013 at 12:43 PM ^

pffft, next you will be saying he has wears glasses and has long hair.......the people here sometimes. 

 

In all seriousness, to the OP, do what you like, follow your heart, don't give up, whatever hallmark catchphrase applies. If this is your passion, keep at  it and do not be afraid to fail. Being able to wake up everyday to do something, and potentially get paid for it, you love is how you beat the world. So do your time at your nine to five and practice your passion when you have the oppurtunity. 

plashy

January 14th, 2013 at 12:07 PM ^

I, too, just recently started a blog with a few friends. We've kept the subject matter as broad as possible (sports, film, tv, books, music, video games) in an effort to have enough content for at least one article every weekday. 

Would also welcome thoughts from anyone bored at work in want of some reading. 

Here 'tis: http://ahorizontalmyth.wordpress.com/