tylerrose

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3 years 34 weeks ago	Is any of your other work	Is any of your other work available online? I'd like to check it out and have a look-see. Thanks!
3 years 34 weeks ago	critique from a fellow designer	A few questions for you. Is the wolverine art of yours a profile shot? Or is the wolverine looking slightly toward us? It looks like you want the wolverine to be in profile, but when you introduced the wings, perspective derailed the final product. Notice the center of the wings are placed above one eye. If the wings are to be centered on your wolverine, they should be centered on the entire face as well, at the ridge between the eyes. Otherwise, I would assume the wolverine has some sort of tie-dye swirl of wings on his forehead. Also, you'll notice on some animals, wolves as an example, there are distinctive areas of another color near the mouth or on the face. Looking at a series of google images, it appears the liberties you took to add the wings wasn't all that far off from the real animal (there appears to be a band of lighter color around the eyebrows), so congrats. I would then ask what the other maize splotches in the artwork refer to. Are those also discolored fur, or are those areas highlighted as if light were shining from the front? If it's referencing shadows and light, why isn't it present anywhere else on the wolverine? I would also consider removing the white glare on the eyeball and then choose between keeping a yellow eye or moving to a white eye. Using white would allow the eye to stand out and justify its use as a third color in your palette. Otherwise I might just keep a yellow eye and yellow teeth.
3 years 35 weeks ago	We can't even cover but one free receiver	Ouch. Looks from that photo like we had about 4 defenders to pick from. Or use in combination.
3 years 37 weeks ago	Meh, I actually think ND has	Meh, I actually think ND has a good enough defense to do the trick. The points SDSU scored were off turnovers and that defense was on the field quite a while. I'd be worried about them gaining confidence as they did in that fourth quarter.
3 years 37 weeks ago	Right.	Right, Boston College. EVERYTHING wrong in the world is Notre Dame's fault.   Get a history beyond Flutie and ND '93.